POEM PIE FOR BIG HUNGER

POEM PIE FOR BIG HUNGER

A Poem by R J Askew
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Humour...well, we all need a chuckle right? I have a friend who does love a drop of a good shepherd's pie, with lashings of Worcester sauce.

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Dice FOUR onions of wit!

Heat a well of writing ink.

Add two verses of minced art.

Crush SIX cloves of red hot love!

Stir in talk of fresh talent.

Mash a layer of wonderment.

SERVE! steaming, with rocket sauce.

© 2008 R J Askew


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Love the humour here... lashings of worcester sauce. Delightful.

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Yes, yes the onions of wit make me cry with laughter but the minced art and cloves of red hot love phwoar, *april fans herself with a poem* OK I'm hungry. I am going to make shepherds pie! I love this Orlando, I am laughing like a drain here :)

... how does a drain laugh I wonder.... hmmmm

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I'll have two to go ...

:-)))

Like it ...

Phil

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

yes. can you not hear my sound of chuckle? though i find your writing can be taken seriously by those who want to be a successful poet.

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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