People From My Past

People From My Past

A Poem by thelux
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Summer, while it should be the time of our lives, can sometimes turn into a bore.

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There's no excitement
Where is the enlightenment?
I can't do this all alone
I should be elated
But I'm feeling kinda hated
Underrated
Faded
This reality will soon turn into an old disturbance
I need something to pump some adrenaline through all our hearts
So people from my past 
Your presence would be appreciated 
And hurry up now
Your visit is already belated



© 2015 thelux



Author's Note

thelux
I don't usually rhyme, but I'd thought I'd give it a try, so feedback on that would be nice. Criticism appreciated :)

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I really like how the structure of this adds to the urge of the poem. I like it a lot keep doing what you're doing!

Posted 2 Years Ago


thelux

2 Years Ago

Thank you very much! I really appreciate it.

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thelux
thelux

Spring, TX



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I'm just an amateur writer who seeks recognition. I mostly write poetry but I also write short stories, screenplays, etc. I'm a big fan of the universe and all its phenomenons but most of my works are.. more..

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