Fear

The stained floor,
it continues to bleed no matter how hard I scrub.
It lives,
it thrives,
The blood on my knuckles weaves within it.
A constant reminder
that you'll always come back to haunt me.

Reviews

[Kate Henderson]

This is short but sweet. I really enjoyed this piece. 10/10

[Luke L]

Whoa awesome writing! I love the passion in it! I can really picture the blood

[Trisha C.]

This sounds so much like me! The way I think sometimes. I like it a lot!

[ChemicalMadness]

A good beginning....I've never been a fan of ultra short pieces, no matter the format. But this piece seems like it holds promise; like it wants to become something more. Good luck on your journey.

CM.

[Chaos X 3]

Short, bloody, and just enough information to grab the reader's attention. Oh, what a tease. :) I have to say that I am intrigued. Can't wait to read some more of your work.