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Author's Note

written for the 'poetry in three lines' contest ♥
http://www.writerscafe.org/contests/Poetry-in-3-lines/51460/
it was interesting to experiment with having limited words. please let me know what you thought of this!

Reviews

[Aswin R Prasad]

And i think you should do this more often 'cuz this experiment is a grand success.. ;)
Although this poem is short , it gives the reader the right emotions after reading each word..
.Really expressive and brilliantly framed lines..
And i'm sure that the limited number of words only made it more interesting 'cuz you could convey more with so little !

Keep writing.. I really enjoyed reading this!

[hannah y.]

ahh, thank you very much!! c: i'm so glad you think so!

[Aswin R Prasad]

Your welcome! :)

[luvs2write]

I'm always up for a new experiment and challenge in writing! It's fun to try out new things and get your creativity flowing. =) I really like this, it's new and different. I like how nothing is capitalized. For some reason, the fact that you have a one word title but you don't use that word throughout the entire poem really stands out to me (in a good way, of course). It's a powerful piece, and I really do love it. Nicely done!!
Keep writing,
luvs2write

[hannah y.]

yeah, experimental pieces are sometimes the best! :) thank you so much for the review!