Anti-Valentine

Anti-Valentine

A Poem by We are young.

 

Anti Valentine.

Swing sets rock back and fourt.

you touch my hand and I touch yours.

I feel your breath and you feel mine.

Too bad your my anti Valentine.

Black lipstick marks litter your face, and tattooed on my back is your name.

Black bracelets of love and hate mixed together, cover your arms.

Hiding the pain within the scars, you grab my hand, and together I know we can make it through this world

 With black wings and petrified smiles, we walk through the doors of life, hand in hand fingernails black, and always getting laughed at.

But you will always be mine. My anti- Valentine.

© 2009 We are young.


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Jae
~ I absolutely love this. It amazing, dark, and absolutely lovely. Good job darling ~

~ Lovely
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Rem

Posted 14 Years Ago


Yes indeed very interesting. It's dark. But in a fascinatting kind of way.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Interesting. Bold, dark imagery.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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I'm not going to same I'm not average, Because I am. I dance in the rain and make sick jokes. I'm not a person who speaks out or who states her opinion. I can be the calmest person when i want to, or .. more..

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