buildings

buildings

A Poem by paul

I wade into madness
like a person in the sea.

i'm sharp on the street
the buildings got nothing
on me.

words are my ally
against the night.

© 2014 paul



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There are those of us who also "wade into madness"; we, however, bring the sea with us.
Here's to buildings appearing dull compared to you and friendly words that continue to pierce the darkness!
A huge amount of commentary packed into such a short broadcast.
Amazing, Paul!



Posted 2 Years Ago


Aloha Paul,

Thank you for stopping by and for your comments. I look forward to reading more of them soon,

This one is quite well written. Nice imagery and emotional content.

alisa ;-)

Posted 2 Years Ago


I quite understand wading into madness, myself. Pitch perfect as always.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Loved this. You're good at writing. I've checked out a lot of your work.

Posted 2 Years Ago


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always something insightful and of note on your pages. i love the visual quality of your work, the metaphors crisp. fantastic.

Posted 3 Years Ago


I found your words inspiring and comforting.

Posted 3 Years Ago


so much said in so few words....and yes, words are powerful and a good ally to have...
we are well equipped to wade into the madness.

Posted 3 Years Ago


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:: wow... that's absolutely stunning poetry, coach... sorry i wasn't here sooner... i love the second stanza especially... you are really sharp... and words are your devotees... :)

Posted 3 Years Ago


paul

3 Years Ago

Thank you Serah ;)
.

3 Years Ago

:: you're very welcome, coach... :P

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