Gonzo Guilt

Gonzo Guilt

A Poem by Commander S.T

The mask that i wear simply is just me

ABRACADABRA, 123

But this mask just wont get off me

Something like wheat hanging from my mouth, almost as if i was from the south

But my presence is granted

Im not really here

My life is based off the imagination of the paper from the tree's

Nothing but black and white

2 G's stand for me

Every step that i take is done figuratively

Step by step my scenes are like a movie

The only problem is im not a movie star

But i am a star in the eyes of my creator

ABRACADABRA, 123

Only thing under the mask is a mask of its own

Or maybe its just me

© 2012 Commander S.T


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yep, it's you.
nice resolution.
"Something like wheat hanging from my mouth, almost as if i was from the south"
very nice phrasing.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

i Love it ..it really shows off your creativity ..keep writing i enjoyed it!!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Commander S.T
Commander S.T

Newark , NJ



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