Remote Control

Remote Control

A Poem by Lyrik
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Experimental piece

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Remote Control


Lavish chair

Dark room

Cold dinner

Telly doom


Warring world

Sporting fumble

Beached Whales

Celebrity bumble


Family laughter

Knead dough

Sudden murder

MIracle grow


Up, up

Numbers go

Buzzing noise

Remote control


Will weak

Life mundane

Up tomorrow

Start again


© 2010 Lyrik



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Lyrik
Just a contest piece.

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I really enjoyed this piece.
It has a lot of character.
I intend to add it to my favorites.
I hope to read more from you soon.

-Elissa :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


nice!
this one made me smile

overall, written well, nice flow. ..not sure about some lines though, such as, "telly doom" but very fun to read indeed
good job

Posted 7 Years Ago



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Lyrik
Lyrik

Louisville, KY



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