'My Exotic Saxophone..'

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"Lonely night..Sparkling dreams..
Engrossed in salty creams..
Did i carry my conscience tonight..
Touch and turn on the deserted light..
Invade streaming smoky eyes..
Leaving behind no whats and whys..
Christen my soul with Lavender Pear..
All visible through shall be my tear..
Come, hold me, My Exotic Saxophone..
Thy colors rhythmic romantic tone..!!"

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Reviews

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Thank you Ms. Stefanie..!!!

[Stef Outsiders]

I could imagine a woman playing her saxophone while moving her hips to the rhythmic romantic tone, closing her eyes and losing herself in something she loves! Such a wonderful write... so creamy! a strange compliment i know but when I read your work, the words fill my mouth like cream... smooth... well done!

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Thnxx Coyote..!!!

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Thnxx Amanda..!!!

[Coyote Poetry]

Music is very sexy. A man or woman who play music. Can bring joy and peace to all around them. I'm a fan of the violin. A woman is very sexy with the skill to make beautiful music can make me crazy. I like this poem. I agree with the poem.
"Come, hold me, My Exotic Saxophone..
Thy colors rhythmic romantic tone..!!""
A excellent poem. Thank you.
Coyote

[Amanda]

Wonderfully written. I like the way your words seem to flow from the page like the sweet melodies of a finely- played sax. Great write