Yer out!

Can't even get to first base

It was the bottom of the ninth, two outs

We were down by one run

Bases were loaded

I was at the plate with a full count

I glanced to the stands and saw her

I smiled at her,

she smiled at him

I struck out,

twice

Reviews

[Chris Shaw]

There are times when we have to remain focused or there will be consequences. A lesson I'm sure many have learned after the event. Strong message conveyed in your lines Anthony.

Chris

[A hare off]

Thank you Chris. I am happy you enjoyed this

[kitty]

Not wise to be distracted while on the game ... so keep your eye on the ball!

[A hare off]

Good advice. Thank you Kitty.

[kitty]

Life has many directions. Choose wisely or live to regret it.... still, destiny dictates in some cases!

[lightsong]

why I'm feeling there is a sexual message behind this? :)

[A hare off]

I'm not sure because I didn't intend one to be there but if you see it that way, that is ok too. Thank you Light for reading my poem today.

[lightsong]

I'm not sure either... maybe my mind drifted somewhere far... lol

You are welcome my friend :)