I gave her a flower

I gave her a flower

and she smiled

 

I handed her a bouquet

and she kissed me

I planted her a garden,

we are still in love

Reviews

[Onlyme]

Adorably endearing and romantic and kind. No wonder you won the fair maiden over. wink.

[A hare off]

Thank you Dawn. I still have to tend that garden. wink.

[Onlyme]

lol...oh Anthony.

[Einstein Noodle]

awwwwwwwww ... very fine ... happy for the man who followed the flowers ;) so simply stated ... deeply romantic and full of positivity ... love most certainly is on the bloom ;) the reading is delightful ..thanks for sharing Hare
E.

[A hare off]

Thank you E for your comment. I am happy you enjoyed this.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i love the progression here...and the uplifting ending that there is no ending...they are still in love...
it all starts with that first flower...and multiplies into the garden if it is meant to last.

beautiful.

[A hare off]

Thank you for reading and for your comment

[Chris Shaw]

Simplicity, but it works so well.

Chris

[A hare off]

Thank you Chris

[goldenscar__]

THIS IS SO BEAUTIFUL... I wanted it to be longer

[A hare off]

Me too but from a single flower to a bouquet to a garden, I didn't know where else to go with it. Thank you goldenscar for your comment

[goldenscar__]

It is perfect that way.. you're most welcome..:)

[kitty]

Sauntering leisurely throughthat garden of love can be the most satisfying feeling one
could ever experience. Beautiful write! Thanks.. Oh to love and to be loved in return!

[A hare off]

It is the greatest feeling for sure. Thank you again Kitty. I am happy you enjoyed this one.

[kitty]

Your writings touches on my personal life my 'friend'- keeps me balanced at a time when things are happening in a world of massive changes and decisions. Thanking you

[Kelly Scheppers]

What is it about flowers that make most of us women go weak in the knees? I'm so girly that way. Lovely sentiment and much enjoyed!

[A hare off]

I don't know but they always seem to make women happy. Thank you Kelly for reading and commenting.

[Kelly Scheppers]

You are most welcomed. It's wonderful to meet you!

[lightsong]

nothing moves a Lady like a flower, and from her man, all the world will be wrapped in this little flower, it will grow and grow to become a garden of love...

[A hare off]

Thank you for reading and for your nice comment. I am happy you enjoyed this one.