seasons

did you find something better?

was i just something to make the time go by faster 

like the reoccurring seasons

or maybe i was something you used

to get your mind off of the tragedy and pain

because every time you would look at me

i would feel like i was four years old again

running down my dirt road in the spring

maybe even summer

with the blue birds chirping in my ears

my heart is pumping

feeling like i'm about to explode from happiness

but now i would prefer for it to explode

and leave me empty

even more empty than how i feel now

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I enjoy your poetry. You give the reader places and things to think about. The test of love is time and effort. Thank you for the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[rachel ann]

Thank you so much, it means a lot. I enjoy yours as well.

[Laura Lynn]

Once we love then we just want to be around that person, it's hard when we just think everything so great is about someone and have never felt that way then what happens? Why do people go away and leave a person?! It makes no sense and is very troubling to us and sad. Yet we all want so many things and to be free and free to love also.

[Wórdsmíth]

The love changes like as well as with the "seasons." Nice imagery.