tiny bag of happiness

It's November now

this time last year you were at football games

or at parties making a fool out of yourself

month from now last year things slip

you get ahold of your worst enemy

you get handed a bag full of happiness

friends fade

your money is leaving quicky

your bag is getting empty

your mind is blank

you sit alone

two months ago you were at games

now youre being discharged

the nurses wish you good luck

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

The ending left me with need of more story. Money is gone and you are being discharged from the hospital. Many kind of bags of happiness. I told my kids. Use time and resources wisely. Thank you for sharing the thoughts provoking poetry.
Coyote

[Justin]

That's how I felt too. Not complaining, it was great. Would love to read a part 2?

[Coyote Poetry]

Yes. Could be a interesting part two.

[Sami Khalil]

"your money is leaving quicky
your bag is getting empty
your mind is blank
you sit alone"

a sad but realistic story. Bravo...................

[JC]

to the point of the downfall that comes with addiction...too too many I've known fallen from grace...I really like the blunt honesty here, very good write.

[Michael Sabino]

This has a great pace. Short phrases that hit the reader like darts until he/she gets the point.

It only really goes by quickly in hindsight, right?