alabama the beautiful

we have hit by serval storms this is for us

alabama so beautiful 

gone with out a sign 

194 died 

and theres so many more 

no power for millions 

no water for some 

please help us 

we need some love 

Reviews

[Pollyanna]

Great, positive thoughts coming your way. ~hugs~

[Mashairi]

sad, sad, sad. i'm prayin' for all my relatives and friends down south, so prayers go out to you and your family, too :)

[Matthew Smith]

Simple poem, but extremely strong. Those of us in Southern Ohio really dodged a bullet, nothing bad, few damages--even more so myself, seeing as I'd been further south.

My heart goes out to the victims.

[fireblossom]

I like your poem. It tells an important story in a clear way. Glad you are alright.

[raindroplove]

thank you all for you reviews. we are helping people in t-town the best we can i live 30 min.s away for where the bad stuff happen i thankful it didnt get us to bad :) thank you alll

[Dragon]

I’ve heard about that. You’re absolutely right about it. It’s sad, yes, but somehow it could be a new beginning. Just thinking out-loud. Sorry. Good work though. :)

[DearSweetAgony]

I live in Alabama too.
And your right it is pretty horrible.
Other than the sadness,this poem is beautiful.
Great Job!

[HopelesslyDevoted]

amazing job!

[Rose-Hip Alice]

Good work! This is pretty good in regards to imagery and rhythm. I also find it very moving. But do you mean "sigh" or "sign" in that second line?

[Short.Nerd]

So sad:( But very good!