Nomad

Nomad

A Poem by Sriparna

The morning breeze wakes her up every morning, played with her messy hair,touches her tired eye lashes , kisses her leaving all its fragrance,comfy her in hot or in cold , as if it loved her from the top to bottom,since years till forever. Still it couldn't be the one with whom in her mind she wakes up every morning . Even the breeze envied him.The only similarity between them was both didn't have a particular destination ,both were nomads.

© 2016 Sriparna



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An elegant scenario written in 'Prose poem' form. The soft metaphor presented here has been wisely constructed. Nomadic wind . . . Nomadic person- the comparison is thoughtful. Well done!

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A nice story told in the short poem. I like the thoughts and the good ending. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
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Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I really liked this!
Keep it up!

Posted 1 Year Ago


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Good personification of the wind.

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To be as nomadic as the wind ... is certainly no nomad living in the Sahara ... Europe ... or elsewhere. It lives in the mind. Nice catch of phrase.

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Sriparna
Sriparna

Kolkata, Humanism, India



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I'm a music lover. Also trying on photography and writing. And I am student of science. I like to express my thoughts and feelings through words. An atheist. :) more..

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