The Numb

The Numb

A Poem by revenant21

We are

The Numb

The ones

Who feel none

We have

Felt the extent

Of the worlds

pain

And now

We just

Can't feel

A thing

The pain we now

Feel has

Carried us away

Through the

Clouds

And up and

Away

The remnants

Of pain

Are all that

Remains

The illusion

Of pain

Is all that

Remains

For we are The Numb

And the pain we once felt

No longer remains

© 2009 revenant21


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Um...
I love this... Your poetic execution is simply amazing!
You are a talented gift!

Very well written and very well presented!

The Duchess,

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is really good! I love the last little bit about all that is left is illusions. Yet another great piece!

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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