Three Cokeheads in a Bar

Three Cokeheads in a Bar

A Poem by Cahjli Symes
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Lmfaoooo

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Chillin in the belly of
The Beast.
We say the truth's a lie,
because we're sick from
what we see.

Ignorant
to what we know
because of
mediocrity.

In a fake reality
where tyranny is
seen as peace.

And illusion is a weapon
cloaked as peace
for sodomy.

Pussyhole.

© 2017 Cahjli Symes



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The statements in the poem. Each set of lines. Left the reader with something to think about. Thank you Cahjli for sharing the entertaining poem.
Coyote

Posted 11 Months Ago


Is this about alternative facts? Or just the blind eye people turn to terrible situations that seemingly have nothing to do with them? Either way, I enjoyed this poem


Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Cahjli Symes

1 Year Ago

Fake news lol
I dunno. Other than to try to shock the reader, what's the purpose? It's not a poem by structure, and certainly the language isn't poetic. And, you make assumptions that don't track.

"We say the truth's a lie"?

Who's we? Certainly not anyone I know, or have ever met. And you don't define which truth this unknown "we" say is a lie. So in general, you're saying,

Things are bad,
And gonna get worse.
I feel so blue,
And I like to curse.

It's been done.

Posted 1 Year Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Cahjli Symes

1 Year Ago

Thank you for your review sir. :)

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Cahjli Symes
Cahjli Symes

Cloud City, FL



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Hi my name is Cahjli and I write poems,screenplays and lyrics. Hope you enjoy :D more..

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