Crushed

True feelings of the mysterious world of breaking up

Crushed

 

You took my heart and held it in your hands.

Gently squeezing with every beat.

Feeling for any signs of life.

Squeezing harder and harder.

Trying to stop the everlasting life.

With the last squeeze you realize its done.

Killing the one and only thing that made sense.

The only thing that cared.

The only thing that made you you.

Reviews

[Dave]

Very very good. Simple yet effectively emotive.

[Jonathan Bodnar]

Wow...Have I felt like that...I really like the simplicity to this, but yet...it holds such a very tight grip on you while you read it, nicely done.

[D. Elizabeth]

Simple... and yet painful to read. I too know the hurt of being crushed, I loved this. xo kudos -.D.E.

[Cats Eye]

Very sweet and to the point, i like it