Erotica

Erotica

Dirty, enticing, stabbing at my soul.

I close my eyes and feel your touch pulling at my core.

Your fingers play, my body reacts, please..please I beg for more.

Your soft kiss and gentle touch, you hint at there being more.

The ice is cold, your breath is hot my tears I cannot control.

Ragged breaths and shuttering hips, those are for you too play with.

My lips contort and whispered breaths of complete obedience.  

I am yours to command, I willingly obey in the hopes you will be kind.

You tease my body because you can, just to show me who I am.

I’m yours, I’m yours, I belong to you are the words you force to to say.

But quietly I think and know, I’m here to give you control.

You take my body past its limits and play with my fragile soul.

My mind is yours, you play with it just to satisfy your ruthless fantasies.

Is this the end, will you stop the pain and save me from myself?

After you're done you put me away, I am your toy to show your friends.

You bring out when you need something to satisfy your darkest fantasies.

I close my eyes and feel your touch pulling at my core…

Reviews

[Konigin]

WOW. It must be amazing to feel this way. I wish that I could fathom it... But great job! You always bring me to the edge of my seat, holding my breath. :)

[ron]

Thank you Chelsea. I hope to do that even more.

[Konigin]

You're Welcome. And good. ;) :P :D

[curvygirlrock]

wow awsome. after reading your writing you now have a fan

[ron]

why thank you.

[curvygirlrock]

your welcome

[Cassiopia Summers]

I like your style of erotica. It's soft and sensual. Great work.

[ron]

Thank you. I like to write in a way that shows who I am not just what I would do.

[Cassiopia Summers]

Agreed. :)

[Emily B]

did she whose touch you write complain of any shortness of breath, or racing of her pulses when you presented these words?

[ron]

No, she said it was good but she doesnt read stuff like this. Why?

[Emily B]

it was just the first thought i had

[Emily B]

it was just the first thought i had

[Emily B]

it was just the first thought i had

[ron]

Thank you. Would you have if it happened to you?

[Emily B]

if the words ever present themselves, i'll let you know

[QuietlyCrash]

Wow, this is tasteful not something I'd expect from erotica at all. Very nicely written :)

[ron]

Thank you. I want to write as if I were making love not having a one night stand...lol.

[QuietlyCrash]

Ha, well that's a good way to write. Too many people don't see the difference between "f*****g" and "making love".

[ron]

Very true