Lost

Invisible creis as a relationship dies.

Lost

Lost, lost and forgotten.

How did I ever get this way?

Torn to shreds no visible scars.

 

Crying out to be heard but never a sound will be uttered.

Tears fall but no moisture found.

How could you not know I feel this way?

 

Deep scars not visible.

The heart beats without a sound.

I look for love but find only ashes spread on the ground.

 

I beg with empty eyes, pleading with soundless sighs.

Wishing and hoping you will see my cries.

Tearing my cloths but no rips are found.

 

Lost, lost and visibly forgotten.

Reviews

[Koibito "Nickie" Kitsuy..]

Truly a poem of deep sadness that makes my heart bleed. Each person's sadness is their own. I can connect with you on that point but the depth of your sadness is expressed with such...I cannot even express with words. I can honestly say that I am at a loss for words with this one and that was no pun intended

[ron]

Thank you Nickie. Sometimes a relationship gets like this.

[Koibito "Nickie" Kitsuya]

I know and they shouldn't be like that but when it does there is this feeling that you have captured so well in this poem.

[ron]

Thank you. You are very kind to say so.

[Keith]

A sad poem indeed. The feeling of being broken but no one can see it, well conveyed.

[Sami Khalil]

Sad but beautiful...:)...

[ron]

Im starting to write my feelings now. Its not easy.

[Sami Khalil]

I felt it...You are welcome...:)

[ron]

Thank you.

[Sami Khalil]

^^~^^ :).....