Travel

A haiku string about two women I saw at a fast food place.

Two women sitting

at a fast food restaurant

three bags between them

Where are they headed?

my curiousity questioned

what were they leaving?

Mother and daughter

went travelling together

for fun or escape

Author's Note

What do you think of the flow? Do each of the haiku fit together? Any kind of feedback would be appreciated. :)

Reviews

[DanaRegen]

First and foremost, thanks for entering this lovely haiku in my contest, and good luck!
Very nice haiku, it expresses the wants of travelers on the road. I thought that every haiku fit together perfectly, and it flowed from haiku to haiku.
Why are they traveling? Where are they going? Someone was very curious about them.
Nicely done barefoot pixie dreamweaver!