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BLOOD LUST CONFECTION

BLOOD LUST CONFECTION

A Story by Sachiko Ruaya
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Boa, a young adventurous boy with a strong sweet tooth, ventures to an abandoned candy store with his friend, Spike. Later on, Boa has lost Spike in the macabre candy store...what next?

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BLOODLUST CONFECTION

SACHI RUAYA

A SMALL POCKET-STORY…

 

Spike?” Boa called. The macabre candy store whiffs of bitter-sweet confectionary and the scarlet paint splattered upwards, towards the wall. Boa’s footsteps imprint the stone floor. WET. The paint is wet…New red paint? In this utterly old building? Or is it?

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The oozy red liquid sends shivers down Boa’s spine, his teeth chattering as the frigid breeze from the wooden-framed windows brush by. “Spikey?”

No answer…

Boa glance down at the cashier table. An untainted wrapped candy! Unable to control his devil temptation, Boa pop the confection in his mouth. A war in his cavity pounces…

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Guns of popping candy shoot out hysteric bullets of flavour, ultimately dying his mouth completely red. But the flavour is nothing like anything before! It is freshly manned iron…blood. Boa spits out the candy in disgust and hastily turn around…around…slowly…

To see Spike’s deathly still body lying there. His skin extremely wrinkly, as if all the blood in his body was sucked out. 


© 2017 Sachiko Ruaya



Author's Note

Sachiko Ruaya
Just a small burst of enjoyment for you...

I honestly rushed this story so feel free to review the smallest of the smallest things or suggestions.

Thanks...

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I don't want to pick at the small things. I want to congratulate you on writing this marvelous story.

Posted 6 Months Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

lol well i love that you wrote it in red as if it was written in blood, i wonder, did eating that candy kill spike? was that his blood popping in boas mouth?

Posted 9 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sachiko Ruaya

9 Months Ago

Hehe...this is what I love about cliffhangers.
I guess I'll leave that to your imagina.. read more

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Added on November 16, 2017
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Tags: Blood, candy, sweets, store, lost, boa, spike, death, horror, mini, story

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Sachiko Ruaya
Sachiko Ruaya

Melbourne, Australia



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