Forever Alone

I was invisable to the world

No one saw me

I was nothing

I ment nothing

 

Then you came along

You looked directly at me

You listened to what I had to say

You heard me

 

I was no longer alone

You could see me

You were the only one

But you could see me

 

You cared for me

You never let me sink back into my own world

When you saw me so did everyone else

You didn't let me be invisable

 

You cared for me

You listened to what I had to say

You saw me like no other

You understood be better then anyone

 

But that all came crashing down

People dissaproved

They started judging you for spending time with me

 

Their judgments ment more to you

Then anything I could say to you

I couldn't convince you to stay

You left me....

 

I am invisible again

No one can see me

Not even you

I am alone again

Forever alone....

 

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Too bad we can't create a place of safety where people who opinions don't matter can't be heard. A powerful and sad poem. I believe happiness is a personal thing. You ever see a large man with a small beautiful woman? They are content. It should be personal desire and need. Not people judging other people life. A excellent poem.
Coyote

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how sad and meloncholy this piece permeates the lost of love

[Marie Harrison]

Oh this is a wonderful poem. But I hope you become visible as soon as you can~! We want to see all of you.

[Cynthia]

I Love This Poem!
I can totally relate to this poem...
'Their judgments ment more to you
Then anything I could say to you
I couldn't convince you to stay
You left me....'

OK, tht May not be what I go through, but I can totally relate to it somehow..