Our Lord my God

Our Lord my God

A Poem by sarah

 I will stay loyal to you Lord

I will not falter

I will not stray from you oh Lord


Though I am weak

And foolish

And meek


You are strong

Wise

And you know all


Lord I will love you

No matter what

I will love you


Lord forgive me for my weakness

Help me to stay strong in your love

And faithfulness


I will stay loyal to you

I will defend your name

And will commit to your word


Though I am beaten

Heart broken

And stabbed for my beliefs


I will stay strong

And defend you

Till the end of my days


I will love you my God

Till the end of days

I will bow down to your glory


For you are mighty

For always

And forever


And I will continue to love you....

© 2010 sarah


Author's Note

sarah
I just felt compelled to write this, it really flowed really well. I am proud of it

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You did a wonderful job with this one.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is very true and good. God is truly amazing despite what happens.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A beautiful poem of fate and hope. We need to believe in something to keep our heart and mind alive. A excellent poem. Thank you.
Coyote

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

nice spiritual thoughts and good hearted intentions

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

graced with gracing, a nice place to be. Nobody gonna be upset with you. You sail with goodness Sarah.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very good. I like it

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Ry
Great poem =)
I'm not religious at all whatsoever, and honestly I don't believe in "God," but I appreciate the people who talk so highly and passionately about their thoughts and feelings and faith.
Good job =)


Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

It is wonderful! I'm just amazed. I really needed to read this today too Sarah. You've truly been inspriational to me today. Thank you for sharing your poem with me.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

lovely flow.... I think this more than poetry, I feel the longing and thirst in a heart for a deeper essence, the solemnity, and most importantly, I prayed along too.

lovely

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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My name is Sarah just another Sarah, to go along with the millions of other Sarah's hehe anyway umm...I am really bad at spelling C and grammar it's a pain in the a*s so...yeah I won't U review books .. more..

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