Darkness Forever

You left me forever
the world looks dark
my tears will go on forever
nothing seems to go right

My simple request was love
order and planning
your simple reply was betrayal

pain and sorrow surround me
you once were my love forever
I feel trapped
my hand rested in yours

alone and afraid
now your hand rests in another's
I'm in a cage with no way to escape

You fooled me, now I hate you
Few love me
You fooled me, yet I still love you
Few care what I do

Though I know what you are
where I am
I wish it weren't real

Wish I could leave you forever
few notice my hurt
to escape the pain forever

sometimes I wish....
cause your eyes wont let me
they could see through my walls
I wish they could see I'm not okay

I hate you
Tears seem to always come
I love you
when I think of all the things done
I hate you
hurting peoples feelings
I love you
they don't say that I hurt them
but I know that I do

Damn emotions!
I apologize for living!
Damn you too!
For speaking
You scorched a part of my spirit
for breathing
that will never repair itself
for hoping

How long will it be
I'll hate you forever
till life has a nice routine
I'll love you forever as well

Author's Note

http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/AngelPaige1994/644851/ angie and I wrote this together these poems are also on her page, please give us feed back. In was an another intertwined poem

Reviews

[Poetic Beauty]

Hate and love go hand and hand sometimes. It is so odd that we can love someone with everything that we have and then hate them at the same time because they have hurt us. This poem expresses just that very clearly however your flow is all over the place. The words are strong and let the reader know just what the narrator is feeling and the imagery is good.

[serpent]

reminds me one of my own pieces.... :)
I have always believed that hatered is the purest of all emotions...and pain, its wrath child...
there is not much left after that void created by those we loved so passionately. we may claim that we hate them but deep inside this hatered is somewhere diluted with particles of love that's nearly dead...

m glad i read this piece.!