My Cat

Just a fun poem

 I love my cat

See where she's sat

She loves the mat

She's big & fat


Sat by her dish

See her wish

She loves fish

And empties the dish


She hears them sing

Her bell goes ding

They see her cling

the birds don't sing


She climbs the tree

It's half past three

It's time for tea

She gets free


She stretches and yawns

curls up in a ball

Goodnight all.


Sally Edwards

14/03/2008

Reviews

[The Archangel Gabriel]

Catz rule! That is such an adorable picture. It almost does not look real with the angle of the head, but I suspect that it is no fraud! Cats are just cool like that.

What did dogs ever do for us besides slobber on us?

Great write!

-Gabe

[James Takeo Panton]

You have captured the essence of feline qualities with few words and simple rhyme structures.....it wouldn't have worked any other way.....excellent...

[Kris Tate]

This is so cute, It reminds me why I love cats.

[Hugh James]

Why are cats always so tired? I guess it must be because of all that lying around they do...:/ Nice poem.

[Joseph - Michael]

LOL! That was really cute. It should be going to one of those "Poetry For Children" or "Family Poetry" things like that. Not to forget that "Animal Poems" or "Pet Pems" if there's any?

Anyway, it's all good...

[Travis Lawrence]

This should be a childrens book. I love it, cats are so interesting and independent!

Have a nice day!

[Brandon]

I really like the fast flow of this poem, and the rhyming is really good. Nice job!

[Dani California]

Aww...this is really cute! Loved it!! :)

[Moonlit-Blues]

awhee, cute poem. Lovely write. hehe, left me longing to see my two cats at home, now!! =D!

[Erin]

Very cute poem. Made me smile. :]