i need you

a girl who wanted to have her boyfriend in her life but.... all her expectations from him were false... the feeling that she is now lost... no turning back.. thats love...what we call life...

I Need You

am i jealous?

yes i am, with the ones who were able to make it..

no, am not a loser, i dont blame anyone but myself..

i was not supposed to expect anything out of this..

what i never expected is what i got..

as in tears and pain from this relationship..

left me broken, all by myself..

no hug can relieve me..

no kiss can make me feel better..

feels like time left me long back, still, cant move on..

can i cry?

can i find myself??

can GOD please call me???

without you i cant live or die..

i need you, not for living or dying but to make life easy and sensible......

-written by saloni singhvi

 

Author's Note

please do let me know about the additions that can be..
and also the mistakes..

Reviews

[Akshat♥]

god is seeing you...so stop worrying about that..
if you don't blame anybody but yourself..
that's incredible ..poem is nice and i liked
the way you presented it here:)

[ZmH]

i love this poem. it shows great emotion
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[Weaza]

I thought it was a very wonderful poem. It was sad and showed how much you cared and you could be the person that is better for him. I really liked it. Continue writing, it was very good!



Weaza

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This poem is great but sad. I enjoyed reading it; you let your emotions be evident in your writing and used imagery.

Don't ever stop writing!

~Phoenix~

[Akira]

THAT WAS GOOD.KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK