Perfect Solitude

Lyrics to a song to be sung...

              

            Perfect Solitude

                                 By Sami Khalil                          

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I want to invite you

Even if you're uncomfortable

To my perfect solitude.

I want you to relax

Take a deep breath

Mind you this imprisonment

We are being glued.

Would you happen to know

Or have you overlooked

The backgrounds we share

The velvet thoughts

The adverts fading away

Into the hypnotic mood.

Lady of grace

Of brighter mornings

Of mislabeled nights

I want to remake songs

Where everything is

Merely a cover

A muffled substitute.

I want to lead in love

Keeping it low key

Where every prelude 

Is a quiet rendition 

To these two hearts

In perfect gratitude.

I want to invite you

When you are comfortable

To my perfect solitude

To my perfect solitude... 

Reviews

[Wondering Mind]

I was once told that solitude is to be destitute of Love, or the one you love; I was much younger then and I didn't believe. Now, with all these years on my shoulders, I'm a believer..
Now to your profound poetry; the perfect solitude would only be not that, but perfection with the one that makes you whole.... Lovely, and apologies for going off in at tangent

[Joseph Mulpeter]

A lovely read :) it has a very relaxing feel to it. bravo!

[Daisy]

To love in the peace of a perfect solitude is the desire of every heart deep down. And your words depicts the power of silence between two hearts so amazingly. Captivating yet mesmerizing! Kudos! Thanks for sharing :)

[Q.]

Sami, thank you for this piece. This brought a quiet satisfaction to me, please keep it up.

[MomzillaNC]

I love this one! So passionate, yet gentle. I’ve thought the best part of a relationship is the comfortable silences between two hearts. I especially like this part:

Lady of grace
Of brigher mornings
Of mislabeled nights
I want to remake songs
Where everything is
Merely a cover
A muffled substitute.

I want to lead in love
Keeping it low key
Where every prelude
Is a quiet rendition
To these two hearts
In perfect gratitude.

NOTE: When you wrote “Of brigher mornings” did you mean “brighter”

[Sami Khalil]

Wow. It is brighter . I will fix it. Thank you so much beloved poet for taking the time and effort ... Take care....:))))

[Riding the Rainbow]

This is so close to my heart. Thank you for writing it, my friend.

[Linda alexander]

An open invitation to some one's solitude which is not impressive in itself, but the promises behind that call make the call most welcoming calling the other person even if he or she is in uncomfortable zone makes the call generous. The promises are not ending there even all the preludes will be actual performances themselves, claiming both share velvet dreams where all negativity vanishes itself. All these features makes the call very special, poet took impressive efforts to portray the special welcoming and genuine call, really interesting piece Sami, beautifully done

[Pryde Foltz]

Two hearts are most content when they can be content together in quiet. A truly lovely write, Sami:)

[Baby Ricochet]

Sublime poem Sami. Love the photo of Hope Sandoval

[Einstein Noodle]

struggling to get the tune right!! ;) i think you should sing it for us Sami :)))) i do love my solitude ..i am introverted and need it to survive and thrive ...inviting someone into it is truly a very special thing .. worth the wait says i!
E.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

a very musical piece...and love that thought of inviting another into our song...hoping the grooves will be filled with love. and the record won't skip.