Soul around you

Soul around you

A Poem by samparks,sam

Image result for the fire in your eyes keep me alive
The soul is around you how I control you should know
Life is surrounding in your deep feelings you must  know
Our life journey just begun for search destination
You take me with a  tight hold on this  journey
I am going  flying in your feeling in every soul breathe
Life is the happy journey along with in your feeling
You are my destination I am your present every time
Want to see every time itself as a in your future
I promised to you I never permit you to go in the past
You are my present and we make to each other bright future
Be smile every time for me
You are greatest mine life every time
See, in my eyes every time
Our liking is the beauty of our life 





© 2016 samparks,sam



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You give unselfishly. ...thats the message i get.... emotion comes threw!

Posted 12 Months Ago


Very deep feelings for your special someone haa...good...nicely penned...there are some errors I'll tell it later

Posted 1 Year Ago


Very touching...tender wisdom...I enjoyed reading it..
Debbie

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very beautiful, but I feel it is a tad disjointed at some parts.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

beautiful loving poem testimony of the power of the journey of love present tense is important
r thanks for your writing!

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sam,
The glow of love;,how beautiful it is; Unity's bliss!

Posted 1 Year Ago


very loving to your dear friend lots of happiness together!!

Posted 1 Year Ago



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Added on November 6, 2016
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samparks,sam
samparks,sam

Indian, India



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I am Chess player, My life always move step with thought of 10 steps ahead every time. Nature is my friend, Keep me smile. I start to write poems without experience of writing, but I can't believe my.. more..

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