Trapped

Trapped

A Poem by Sarah Lynn


As i sit and watch the days passing by 
I can feel my spirit slowly dying inside 
I can feel my motivation just dying out 
While everyone else's is just flying about 
I see my bright sunny days surely turning to gray
How did my life even get this way ?
Crying on the inside smiling on the out
Is this what life is really all about ?
Never being happy and always feeling sappy
Watching others always having a " bright and cheerful day " 
While you just sit there letting life pass you away .
This world is so big and so full of life 
I just cant seem to pull myself out though , out of this dark constant night.
While others are warm and bright , i'm dark and cold.
I wish life would finally let my story unfold. 
But my life's going no where , no where at all.
I guess until then ill just sit here.. sit here staring at this plain blank wall..


© 2013 Sarah Lynn



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This is a sad mood to dwell in----- so come to me
and listen to my tale of chase`n cattle on the
old Chisome Trail, or something else that might
make your day-----I`ll tryl
Thanks for the contribution.
----- Eagle Cruagh

Posted 4 Years Ago


That describes exactly how I feel right now, another great job hun

Posted 4 Years Ago


Very sad depressing emotional peace.
Really felt your emotions through it, it has very much meaning to it as well.
I love the rhyming scheme as well.
Sucks that you are feeling like this though i do hope things get better.
Great write :)

Posted 4 Years Ago


This is a great one too! You are a great writer! Keep up the good work hun.
-hannahmarie xo

Posted 4 Years Ago


Sarah Lynn

4 Years Ago

Thank you so much ! (:
wow touching piece. very well written had great rhyming to it.
keep your head high don't give up.
i'm going through a depressing stage in my life but the worst thing is to give up. things will get better you just gotta believe in that.
great write once again :)

Posted 4 Years Ago


mark

4 Years Ago

you're welcome :) yeah it does im going through allot at the moment. almost making me actually get d.. read more
Sarah Lynn

4 Years Ago

Thats right ! Well you keep your head up and i will too !
mark

4 Years Ago

will do haha :)

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Added on October 29, 2013
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Tags: depression, life, sad, unhappy

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Sarah Lynn
Sarah Lynn

Rochester, NY



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