When The Time Comes

When The Time Comes

A Poem by Sarah Lynn

If i ever seen you again, i'm pretty sure my heart would just stop.
The air would grow thicker, making it hard to breathe.
Id be at a loss for words 
Every single memory I have of you would come flowing back into my mind.
For that one moment, when i lay eyes on you again. Time will stand still.
I know it will. 
One look into my eyes and i will be stuck. 
Cant move.
Cant breathe.
Cant even speak. 
Just completely and totally losing all control over myself and will then be stupified pretty much.
Its such a scary thought. 
Why ? 
Because i know our goodbye wasn't our last.. we will meet again. 


© 2013 Sarah Lynn



Author's Note

Sarah Lynn
Its a little out of my comfort zone again because i like to rhyme , but i had to for this one. Im sure we all have that on person where you fell in love quick, just dove in so quickly. Had amazing times together and so in love but then it all went down hill fairly quickly. And this .. this is how you would feel if you had to see that person again.

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I liked the stream of consciousness. The imagery is powerful.

Posted 3 Years Ago


even though you may be more comfortable with rhyming, this is a powerful piece.

Posted 3 Years Ago


This is very nice I like poems that rhyme to but I always felt a poet can be way more in def without rhyming manly my poems don't rhyme either😊 it makes a difference

Posted 3 Years Ago


Soft and emotional piece
We will all definitely meet again

Posted 4 Years Ago


very beautiful poem :)...

Posted 4 Years Ago


Sarah Lynn

4 Years Ago

Thank you (:
It's good to write outside of your comfort zone sometimes. The content here is very good, heartfelt and poignant. Love grabs a piece of our heart, and seeing that one that got away again can, as you so eloquently put it, stupify us.

Posted 4 Years Ago


This is amazing, that's happened to me on a couple of occasions lol Awesome Job Kido!! :P

Posted 4 Years Ago


Sarah Lynn

4 Years Ago

Thank you !(: I love your reviews lol
David Burke

4 Years Ago

You're welcome :) and thanks lol I always try to tell the truth
Oh, how I love the way all the words just flow together. I can understand exactly how it feels. Reading your writing has just given me great joy. I hope you will keep on writing.(:

Posted 4 Years Ago


Sarah Lynn

4 Years Ago

Thank you so much!!! (: Of course i will!
Yes. This is a scary feeling, and I think you've expressed it quite well

Posted 4 Years Ago


Sarah Lynn

4 Years Ago

Thank you. I thought it was pretty dead on if i do say so myself haha

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Sarah Lynn
Sarah Lynn

Rochester, NY



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20 Years Old ! I love to just go out and have fun with my friends and boyfrined . I used to write a lot but sort of lost my way , hopefully this will get me started again! Very happy person whose .. more..

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