This Was Cobra Night

This Was Cobra Night

A Poem by Satish Verma
"

O pathfinder, you wanted to leave unsung.

"
O pathfinder, 
you wanted to leave unsung. 
One day I will track down your footmarks. 

Last night I understood 
the unholy drowning of the truth, 
before the priests of innocent surrender. 

Jealousy was the secret of 
downfall.You can use the parenthesis now 
to defend the corporate 
blunders. 

Politics has become a 
grammar to cheat the morphology 
of gospels. 

Do not go like naked truth 
in the crowd.I wanted back 
my eyebaths to see clearly. 

The gap between the lips 
was widening..

© 2018 Satish Verma


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wow , this was deep , keep writing

Posted 5 Years Ago


This is really beautiful and unique in its own way. I especially like how you finish with the piece. "The gap between the lips was widening...." This is such a perfect way to really emphasize the message of your poem. You have your own unique voice, and I can really hear it in this piece. You have your own views on your surroundings and your observations that you are really good at showing. You don't have to be completely conspicuous as to what you are trying to portray either, which I have found is a huge talent to be able to speak to your readers without completely shoving your voice and ideas down their throat. I applaud you for your originality. You really stood out from tons of other writers I've read. Thank you.

Posted 5 Years Ago


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All the worsened circumstances of political issues must effecting the daily life of ordinary people...we..the posh meal of their monster like hunger!
Thanks for sharing this Satish!

Posted 5 Years Ago



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Added on June 27, 2018
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