An ode to Plants..

An ode to Plants..

A Poem by Saumya
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A piece showing the significance of plants in our lives...

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Sweeter than a friend,
Better than a foe,
Enriched with goodness,
We hardly know.

They grow taller,
They grow wider,
seeds turn into plant,
And plant forms seeds,
A miraculous phenomenon,
We hardly see.

They give us fruits,
Some sour, some sweet.
They give us veggies,
We so much need!
They give us medicines,
We often need.
And what about Oxygen,
Which is our basic need.?

They give, and give
With all courtesy,
Without being selfish,
Devoid of greed

A real friend,
We always need .
The one who gives
and Expects the least!
The one without which,
Life might cease.

Shrub or herb,
Plant or tree
adorn our environment,
Like birds and beasts.

Hues of Cherry,
Grape, Rosemary,
Lavender or Lemongrass widespread,
Rue, cinquefoil, or even sassafras
cures all maladies,
A doctor said.

Inhaling the essence
Of an aromatic plant,
Makes one feel fresh,
The way they dint prior witnessed!

Yet we move away,
Not feeling the sway,
They've so much in them,
So much to be explained and said.


Like, love , and nurture trees,
Plant them more,
Devoid of greed.
Flowering, fruiting,
Or only with leaves,
Fill our earth,
With greenery & Peace
And if we live in
our worlds carefree,
they're the reason,
Who forever fulfill
our needs and greeds.

© 2016 Saumya



Author's Note

Saumya
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-Saumya

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Wow... An amazing read! I loved it so much, you truly used your words as medicine or like a spell, which will totally encourage the people to respect our true friends. Just beautiful!

Posted 3 Months Ago


Saumya

3 Months Ago

Thankyou so much Anjali :) Im glad you liked this poem 😊
Anjali

3 Months Ago

You are welcome!
This is a heart touching poem. I love plants and greenary and this poem is just so amazing. Truly a very good write. Keep it up.

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Saumya

3 Months Ago

Thankyou Najam :) I'm glad you liked the piece!
Najam Us Saher

3 Months Ago

You're most welcome. :)
Very sweet, peaceful...very thoughtful.

Posted 6 Months Ago


Saumya

6 Months Ago

Thankyou! :)
girlontop

5 Months Ago

I agree with katseye ;)
Saumya

5 Months Ago

Thankyou😊
Aw I love this poem!! It's really honest and very cute. I love plants a lot (I even name all of mine and talk to them haha). Plants are definitely my friends and it's nice to read a poem all about the nice stuff about plants :)

Posted 6 Months Ago


Saumya

6 Months Ago

Wow! I'm glad to know that you love plants too :)
Thankyou for your lovely words :)
This has a nice feel to it Saumya.
It lacks balance in that some plants are not good - Japanese knotweed for example could be referred to for a little balance.

This made me think of a short story (TV programme) about a man who could hear flowers communicating.
It's scary - Be warned !!!

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VkVndGwNs6o

Posted 9 Months Ago


Saumya

9 Months Ago

Oh :(
May your uncle's soul rest in peace!
Amen.
Tony Jordan

9 Months Ago

He bequeathed a fine (large) family to the world.
I'm sure he's looking down smiling upon th.. read more
Saumya

9 Months Ago

:) you're welcome
This made me miss all of the flower gardens I had planted around my house in Arkansas. When I lost my husband I moved to the ice cold north. Valentine

Posted 10 Months Ago


Love this poem! Plants are truly great and special.

Posted 10 Months Ago


What a true voice you have my frnd. I have seen people writing for plants and they were all very good but what your poem has in special is the down to earth thoughts, the basic things and the most important things about plants that we often ignore. It is not only a tribute to plants but a tribute to the natural world... I know Margie would love this poem...

Great job! I'm glad to be back here and read your work...

Sincerely
Dhiman

Posted 10 Months Ago


Saumya

10 Months Ago

Thank-you so much for such a lovely review, Dhiman :) I'm glad you liked the simplicity and humblene.. read more
Like this ; noble and true thoughts..well done, my congratulations !

Posted 10 Months Ago


Saumya

10 Months Ago

Thank you! :)
Humans have a tendency to not pay attention to such like when in truth we need them...beautifully done...

Posted 10 Months Ago


Saumya

10 Months Ago

I agree with what you stated :)
Thank you for the thoughtful review, Poppy :)

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