Nonsense

Nonsense

A Poem by LSS
"

It can't be a limerick, thar.

"

As 'Rip-it' and clean 'Snip-it' are,

     So 'Nip-it' and gross 'Strip-it' bar.

There's not alot room left so far,

     For 'Whip-it', 'Tip-it', 'Flip-it's par.

So leaks the credit jar.

© 2008 LSS


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LSS,
"Nonsense"
This actually is serious in a way. So many struggle with credit cards. You have covered some of the uses of this plastic. I got the tip it part. Snip it; just cut the blasted thing up and be done with it.
Ha ha. I didn't totally get it but enjoyed all the same! Were you aiming for a limerick. It would work.
Blessings,
Kathy

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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LSS,
"Nonsense"
This actually is serious in a way. So many struggle with credit cards. You have covered some of the uses of this plastic. I got the tip it part. Snip it; just cut the blasted thing up and be done with it.
Ha ha. I didn't totally get it but enjoyed all the same! Were you aiming for a limerick. It would work.
Blessings,
Kathy

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very giddy. Nice job its a playful too.

Posted 15 Years Ago


That one is cool....nice wording, playful and fun. Great Job

Posted 15 Years Ago



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Syracuse, NY



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