feeling blue

feeling blue

A Poem by Mr.Writer

feeling blue
don't know what to do
feeling empty like a vase without flowers;
except, the pain is deeper and has more power
it's taking over my life and I don't even have a say
the pain is getting worse and worse every day 
I don't feel like doing much anymore
and I don't see an open door;
to guide and lead me away from all this pain
I'm falling down;
and the worst thing about it is;
there's no one to cry to
and express everything I've felt and said in this poem

© 2017 Mr.Writer

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Genuine and heart felt..I'm willing to wager you felt good after venting your emotion through words..
check out soul flu or entrenchment..

Posted 6 Days Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Your words are always so insightful, full of emotion....raw, human emotion. That's what makes you such a great writer: your ability to be REAL. Thank you for sharing.

Posted 1 Week Ago


6 Days Ago

Thank you so much Anastasia!!!
Anastasia Purvis

5 Days Ago

You're welcome! I miss you, my friend!!!
Sometimes, some situations pushes us in the pit of the worst pain and we don't even know what to do right at the moment, and no one there stays with us at that time to take an advice from.your poem truly states this.
Just keep on smiling:)

Posted 4 Months Ago


4 Months Ago

Very true indeed! Thank you Priyanshi! :))
This is so lonely, I love it. It's also very relatable and emulates true human emotion. Well done!

Posted 4 Months Ago


4 Months Ago

Thank you! :)

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4 Reviews
Added on November 17, 2017
Last Updated on November 17, 2017



Toronto, Ontario, Canada

First of all... I love to write! It has always been my passion to write since... last year! :D I can easily pour my emotions in writing without telling them to anyone. I love to review people's work.. more..