Have You Ever(Cried for no reason)

Prepare yourself 

This might take awhile

I just have to get this out

...

Have you ever cried for no reason

cried because your ice cream was half full

only to find out it was you all along

Have you ever cried for no reason

Just because you watch a three hour movie 

about some guy and about some girl 

have you ever cried for no reason

Because you were stuck in traffic

which lead you to arrive at the store

one minute late and 

the clark said sorry were closed

Have you ever cried for no reason

because you left the bathroom

with tissue dragging on your shoe

and a person pointed at you

Have you ever cried for no reason

For no apparent reason at all

Have you ever cried for no reason 

Just to find out what you were crying about

was actually meant to be funny but

 you took it all wrong

Have you ever cried for no reason

Just for having twenty snot tissues 

thrown all over your floor 

which makes you cry even more

Have you ever stopped crying in the mist of crying 

and said 

WHAT THE HECK AM I CRYING FOR!

The end!

Reviews

[Annabelle Lee]

Lol i'm not much of a crier, I throw things, but yeah I get what this is about

[Shimae Parks]

thanks for your review :)

[1Disawsum]

aha great poem, and yes, it has happened to me a few times! I cried for so long, too long, and just asked myself, "WHAT THE HECK AM I CRYING FOR!" aha love this poem, great effort!

[Shimae Parks]

Thanks for the review!

[Jennifer Johnston]

I like it. I think your concept could be stronger if you include the reason "why" there was no reason to cry. I think this could also be a bit longer, as it'll more fully flesh out the idea you are trying to get across. Finally, if this is a "woman's poem", perhaps make this more clear (women issues are easy to recall--if you've ever accidentally poked yourself in the eye with mascara, than you know what I mean :). If it's meant for any gender, then I think it's working fine. Let me know if this helps!

[Shimae Parks]

Its more general not directed to anyone I just gave an example in my comment but in poems you always have to look out side the box to get the point and the laugh. Thank you for the review

[Shimae Parks]

I hope everyone gets the meaning of the poem It is meant to be funny, light and fun. I know a lot of women when their hormones are really crazy such as the time of the month they cry for no reason. When a women is pregnant and they cry for no reason, then when they realize that all the crying for no reason they stop crying. I hope I explain the meaning for those that are confused. Thanks for reading..

[Bob the Unicorn]

Slightly confusing.......

[Shimae Parks]

Instead of being upset or mad about the things mentioned this person cry's about everything until the person realizes that they were crying for no reason at all.. It is meant to be funny.

[Bob the Unicorn]

Thanks for clearing that up for me. I'm new at the whole poetry thing so...

[Shimae Parks]

no problem most of the time poetry is using more the just reading it also means you have to think of what the author meant by what they wrote or think out side the box or analyze what they wrote and make your own conclusion or ending