Haiku

26

A sun kissed morning
Birds chitchat excessively
sleep burns off like dew

copyright © K. Wilhelmina Floria

Reviews

[pal]

Short and sweet. Well expressed.
Pal

[Barbara Walker]

Great haiku, nice imagery. It's difficult to say much with few words but you succeeded with this one.

[Angel's Lady]

Sweet! I love this! Man, I sure wish I'd written it!
Nicely done!

[Silent Kim aka mizmetaphysicallady]

Thank you beautiful. If you had wrote it it would of been better. :-)

[Angel's Lady]

Well now that's just not possible! It is fabulous!

[Gandré]

Hi Kim,
happy to see you writing (and posting) again :))
this is sweet HAIKU to read, especially in this dark European winter... I didn't see sun for a long time haha

[Silent Kim aka mizmetaphysicallady]

So glad to hear from you. So you're back in Europe. I hope all is well. I hope to become active soon. I'm blogging and that takes up a lot of my time. http://silentlyheardonce.wordpress.com Check it out if you find time. Let me know you were there. :-)

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Wow that is simply lovely.

[Silent Kim aka mizmetaphysicallady]

Thanks. This is haiku's right? Because it's about nature. The other two are not right.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Yes it is.