Un-named song

just something i kinda wrote one day, trying my hand at music, this is probably the only one that wasn't horrible though

It wasn't the stars with their faltering light

It wasn't the sun in the morning bright

But shining through everlasting night

I fell for you

 

Your eyes met mine with a passion long lost

Our bodies entwined with forgotten cause

For repentance give innocence, babe

I fell for you

 

Oh I  fell for you

One night long ago

Yes I  fell for you

Innocent, lost and alone

I fell for you

 

We were walking, it was late at night

The moon was dim but the stars were bright

My angel, sweet angel, yes

I fell for you

 

Oh I fell for you

One night long ago

Yes I fell for you

Innocent, lost and alone

I fell for you

 

I held you close when you shut your eyes

Your body cold, I had to realize

Untainted, you feinted, then gone

But I fell for you...

 

Oh I fell for you

One night long ago

Yes I fell for you

Innocent, lost and alone

I fell for you

I fell for you

 

I fell... for you

Author's Note

it's kinda depressing.. may not make much sense either lol

Reviews

[Desert Dreamer]

Very well written, the words flow nicely, and I thought it was a love poem! I like your poem.