A mark

We are the generation who need hope.

We make a mark;
too precious to leave
but too complicated to withdrawal.

Author's Note

Sorry i haven't been so active lately. I have had exams last week an this week. - Melody x

Reviews

[wordman]

we need hope,we have lost our way

[Wajiha Nayeem]

deep and it took me away with the wonderful words written here...keep writing.

[Najam Us Saher]

So deep.....very thoughtful...nicely written...

[Zephyr]

I agree Melody.
A simple but meaningful work. Keep writing girl:)

[Priyanshi]

I loved this lovely poem, dear....very well portrayed it...thanks for sharing .

[Abhishek Asthana]

i was expecting some more lines to be added...cute piece... very nicely written :)

[z.chéri]

You can always add your own lines onto my poetry! Some of them i leave short so i can allow people to imagine what would be a good way to continue on this poetry story. Have s great day!

[Sofia]

All your poems are so lovely..I really love them.. I'm totally amazed by the way you write..even this one was wonderful...keep it up :)

[z.chéri]

Thank you! You are too kind. x

[Sofia]

My pleasure dear one😃