Honey

Honey

A Poem by z.chéri
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There is much more to looks.

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Sweet like honey but
she will deceive you so please
don't fall for beauty.

© 2017 z.chéri



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z.chéri
:) - Melody x

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A short poem, but have much depth, its really hard to express so much in so little lines, this is really nicely written :):)

Posted 1 Month Ago


A girl in a mask can show much beauty than she who paints with bright colors, if magnifying glasses were only to cover the eyes, we would have to love from very far.

Posted 11 Months Ago


nice.....so nicely written...

Posted 11 Months Ago


z.chéri

11 Months Ago

thank you!!
you are a haiku expert . for me i just wrote one and its hard to give a meaning in these three lines

so beautiful

Posted 11 Months Ago


good one, dear...I loved the haiku...keep on writing.

Posted 11 Months Ago


I have a few suggestions, this is good but would improve if it was longer. maybe having some details on why looks are deceiving

Posted 11 Months Ago


z.chéri

11 Months Ago

This is a haiku so it was difficult for me to add detail. Maybe I will do a continue one in this. Th.. read more
xoxo

11 Months Ago

that's what i meant, like make a piece and go into more detail on the same subject
I agree with you.
Looks can deceive.
Short and meaningful.
Good haiku:)


Posted 11 Months Ago


well sometimes we just can`t help it

Posted 11 Months Ago


Again, nice message. Good job :)

Posted 11 Months Ago


Exactly.....Strong message very well conveyed in a haiku....I loved it.

Posted 11 Months Ago



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Added on June 25, 2017
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z.chéri

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