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Honey

Honey

A Poem by z.chéri
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There is much more to looks.

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Sweet like honey but
she will deceive you so please
don't fall for beauty.

© 2017 z.chéri



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z.chéri
:) - Melody x

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A short poem, but have much depth, its really hard to express so much in so little lines, this is really nicely written :):)

Posted 4 Months Ago


A girl in a mask can show much beauty than she who paints with bright colors, if magnifying glasses were only to cover the eyes, we would have to love from very far.

Posted 1 Year Ago


nice.....so nicely written...

Posted 1 Year Ago


z.chéri

1 Year Ago

thank you!!
you are a haiku expert . for me i just wrote one and its hard to give a meaning in these three lines

so beautiful

Posted 1 Year Ago


good one, dear...I loved the haiku...keep on writing.

Posted 1 Year Ago


I have a few suggestions, this is good but would improve if it was longer. maybe having some details on why looks are deceiving

Posted 1 Year Ago


z.chéri

1 Year Ago

This is a haiku so it was difficult for me to add detail. Maybe I will do a continue one in this. Th.. read more
xoxo

1 Year Ago

that's what i meant, like make a piece and go into more detail on the same subject
I agree with you.
Looks can deceive.
Short and meaningful.
Good haiku:)


Posted 1 Year Ago


well sometimes we just can`t help it

Posted 1 Year Ago


Again, nice message. Good job :)

Posted 1 Year Ago


Exactly.....Strong message very well conveyed in a haiku....I loved it.

Posted 1 Year Ago



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Added on June 25, 2017
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z.chéri
z.chéri

Melbourne, Australia



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