Honey

Honey

A Poem by Simple Melody ♡
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There is much more to looks.

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Sweet like honey but
she will deceive you so please
don't fall for beauty.

© 2017 Simple Melody ♡



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Simple Melody ♡
:) - Melody x

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A girl in a mask can show much beauty than she who paints with bright colors, if magnifying glasses were only to cover the eyes, we would have to love from very far.

Posted 4 Months Ago


nice.....so nicely written...

Posted 4 Months Ago


Simple Melody ♡

4 Months Ago

thank you!!
you are a haiku expert . for me i just wrote one and its hard to give a meaning in these three lines

so beautiful

Posted 4 Months Ago


good one, dear...I loved the haiku...keep on writing.

Posted 4 Months Ago


I have a few suggestions, this is good but would improve if it was longer. maybe having some details on why looks are deceiving

Posted 4 Months Ago


Simple Melody ♡

4 Months Ago

This is a haiku so it was difficult for me to add detail. Maybe I will do a continue one in this. Th.. read more
xoxo

4 Months Ago

that's what i meant, like make a piece and go into more detail on the same subject
I agree with you.
Looks can deceive.
Short and meaningful.
Good haiku:)


Posted 4 Months Ago


well sometimes we just can`t help it

Posted 4 Months Ago


Again, nice message. Good job :)

Posted 4 Months Ago


Exactly.....Strong message very well conveyed in a haiku....I loved it.

Posted 5 Months Ago


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Zoe
Ahhh...true...first impression deceives many...well summarised in just a few words

Posted 5 Months Ago



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Added on June 25, 2017
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Simple Melody ♡
Simple Melody ♡

Melbourne, Australia



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Young aspiring poet. ♡ Haiku lover ♡ "We don't read and write poetry because it's cute. We read and write poetry because we are members of the human race. And the human race is fille.. more..

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