In between those 2 lines...

In between those 2 lines...

A Poem by Writer at last! Sky ~



In between those 2 lines.....


I want to share my story with you
But
Just In between those 2 lines.....


I want to share my dream with you 
But
Just In between those 2 lines.....


I want to write a song with you
But
Just In between those 2 lines.....


I want to live a life with you 
But
Just In between those 2 lines.....


My Story, Dream the Song & Life
It's empty all, just black n white lines.......


Come soon my love & fill all those empty lines 
So that
We can share our story
But
Just In between those 2 lines....
Oh Yes
We can share our story
But
Just In between those 2 lines.....



Sometimes just 2 lines are enough to fill empty spaces in life.....
First line: I love you!
Second line: I love you too!





© 2017 Writer at last! Sky ~


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Sky,
U use simple words with deep meaning.i loved this one too. Thanks fo sharing.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Writer at last! Sky ~

4 Years Ago

Yes, I try to be as simple as possible. Thanks Pradnya for the read happy that you like it :)
that's really sweet and simple but powerful, very good Sky

Posted 5 Years Ago


Writer at last! Sky ~

5 Years Ago

Thanks friend :)
No space left between me and you!
Saying it as it is to make the two complete.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Writer at last! Sky ~

5 Years Ago

Yes dear friend. I & Me turns into "We" in love.
Best lines ... To describe " those two lines"

Posted 5 Years Ago


Writer at last! Sky ~

5 Years Ago

Thanks buddy :)
Life and love intermingled living in harmony. Equal and soulmates. Can't be whole without the other.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Onlyme

5 Years Ago

I thought so. :)
Writer at last! Sky ~

5 Years Ago

You thought right 👉
Onlyme

5 Years Ago

😊🏌️‍♀️hole in one.. yupie.
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Ah! Man you're master in repetition of poems...in reading those repeated lines...wasn't bored even for a second...but got a kicky read at last! Totally great read!!😊

Posted 5 Years Ago


Writer at last! Sky ~

5 Years Ago

What's life without love and love without life? Two hearts in love simply needs to share a smile :)
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5 Years Ago

((Smile))...!!!
Yes even I would want it to be just in between two lines. Great write,loved it

Posted 6 Years Ago


Writer at last! Sky ~

6 Years Ago

Thanks Mallishka :)
I like it. The transition from the pattern of the first part to the wordier second part was a little unsettling, but I like the two lines.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Writer at last! Sky ~

6 Years Ago

Glad you like :)
I like the style of this poem, very cool

Posted 6 Years Ago


Writer at last! Sky ~

6 Years Ago

Style matters, Personality counts! That's how i think. Thanks friend :)
Unique presentation. I rather like it. Thanks!

Posted 6 Years Ago


Writer at last! Sky ~

6 Years Ago

Thanks Kitty!!!

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Added on November 6, 2017
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