In between those 2 lines...

In between those 2 lines...

A Poem by SKY



In between those 2 lines.....


I want to share my story with you
But
Just In between those 2 lines.....


I want to share my dream with you 
But
Just In between those 2 lines.....


I want to write a song with you
But
Just In between those 2 lines.....


I want to live a life with you 
But
Just In between those 2 lines.....


My Story, Dream the Song & Life
It's empty all, just black n white lines.......


Come soon my love & fill all those empty lines 
So that
We can share our story
But
Just In between those 2 lines....
Oh Yes
We can share our story
But
Just In between those 2 lines.....



Sometimes just 2 lines are enough to fill empty spaces in life.....
First line: I love you!
Second line: I love you too!






© 2017 SKY



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Yes even I would want it to be just in between two lines. Great write,loved it

Posted 7 Months Ago


SKY

6 Months Ago

Thanks Mallishka :)
I like it. The transition from the pattern of the first part to the wordier second part was a little unsettling, but I like the two lines.

Posted 7 Months Ago


SKY

7 Months Ago

Glad you like :)
I like the style of this poem, very cool

Posted 7 Months Ago


SKY

7 Months Ago

Style matters, Personality counts! That's how i think. Thanks friend :)
Unique presentation. I rather like it. Thanks!

Posted 7 Months Ago


SKY

7 Months Ago

Thanks Kitty!!!
It's what in between the lines that really counts! Sweetly romantic write, Sky. Lydi**

Posted 7 Months Ago


SKY

7 Months Ago

Thanks Lydi** :) I appreciate your views.
I like it. I feel like you said so much without having to say much at all. :)

Posted 7 Months Ago


SKY

7 Months Ago

Thanks Aaliyah :)
That was a very sweet and unique poem. I agree those two lines are pretty much all I need to hear.

Posted 7 Months Ago


SKY

7 Months Ago

And I'm pretty sure about just those 2 lines....lol
Well thanks friend for your sweet review .. read more

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Added on November 6, 2017
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