Even if it takes 10 lifetimes

I'm in love with this person so much 7-23-17 11:55 PM

The sky may be dark and the sun might not shine

The rain may be heavy and the wind might be cold

But that smile of yours never fails to amaze me

And that laugh of yours is pure music to my ears

To you who makes me flutter like this

I blame you for making me smile like an idiot

It makes me happy looking back to the time

I fell for you just because you make me laugh

I wonder though if you'll ever know

That a person like me loves a person like you

I didn't know before if a person can fall for one's personality

Until I have proven that I fell in love with yours

You are my sunshine every morning

and my star every night

You are the smile for my tears

and the laugh for my sadness

I discovered that you like the stars too

I wonder if we could go stargazing together

Every time that I look up at the night sky

I wonder if we're looking at the same star

I like the way how you make people laugh

But will you realize that one of them is in love with you ?

One of them prays every night to be with you

One of them wishes every 11:11 to be with you

One of them is me who fell for you badly

I look at your eyes like gazing at a beautiful soul

I look at your lips like admiring such angelic voice

I'm aware you're not perfect and that's the reason I love you

Even if I have no chance for you today

For you, I will still be praying every night

I will keep on wishing on every shooting star

I will keep on hoping every 11:11

Even if it will take away all my strength

Even if it would take me 10 more lifetimes

I will always be hoping to be with you

To hold hands with you and look at the same starry sky

Because the me who fell in love with you today

Will always be the me who'll continue falling for you 

It's true that there are millions of stars in the sky

But you'll always and forever be the only star I'll look at

Reviews

[Bhuyanshi Talukdar]

Your poem is absolutely beautiful and heartfelt. I can feel the depth of your emotions and the sincerity of your love for this person. Your use of imagery and language is truly masterful, and I was struck by the way that you convey such complex emotions with such simplicity and grace. I particularly loved the way that you explore the theme of unrequited love, and the way that you express your hope and faith that someday, this person will see you too. Your poem is a powerful reminder that love can be both beautiful and painful, and that it is always worth pursuing, even in the face of adversity.

[Keagen Cole]

This is very well written! I related to this so much when I had a crush in 8th grade. I gotta say, Sky Writer can turn pure emotion into a poem, a skill not many people have. :)

[TaraNicole]

Ohhh..I just hope that when he does find out that not only were they wishing on the same star, but that they were each wishing for the other! I've been this girl wishing and hoping and praying..I am her right now as a matter of fact😏

[Lea Sheryn]

A beautiful thought put into words.

[Edie Blue Starfish]

a lovely and romantic write, I understand that crush from a distance but it begs the question - why not let her know!

the poem is beautiful and heartfelt

[Sawdust]

the writing makes me love the way you write