Three words.

Three words painted my future,

then two more brought it crumbling down.

"Im Sorry."

Reviews

[Leon C]

I loved this but....

you missed an apostrophe - sorry for being picky

[Jesse Woolridge]

The best poetry has the most meaning in the fewest words possible. My favourite thus far. Thank you :)

[Leslie Philibert]

A Catholic priest that I know said to me ; Never apologise ; that`s the way you felt. Like the poem, fine job

[Rich13White]

Isn't that the truth,nice words...

[Mayank]

Most pathetic words 'I'm sorry' do anything for f**k sake, say 'sorry' later.

[Relic]

Hmm? Three? Two more? I'm slightly lost? I'm is a contraction of I am which you already know. 'I am sorry' is three words. What are the two others?

[rach]

'I love you" gave me a future and "Im sorry" took it away.

[Relic]

Ah, I see.

[james miles]

wow...this is such wonderful poetry!