Withdraw

Explosion.

Searing pain,

blurry vision,

sweat pour down like a waterfall,

foaming at the mouth,

let me put it sweet and simple,

withdraw sucks.

Author's Note

I am not an addict, I am not going through withdraw. Just wanted to post something because I have been thinking of this as I drove to work.

Reviews

[Pete]

"sweat pour down like a waterfall" - great simile. Nice job.

[Samantha Jenkins]

Thank-you.

[Paul Bell]

Think you should have stayed in bed.

[Samantha Jenkins]

That bad?

I am actually not an addict and I did not have these issues.

[Paul Bell]

No, the poem is great. The symptoms should keep you in bed. lol