i dream hurt

i dream hurt

A Poem by solitare
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a little odd tale which may not make sense... basically an imaginative piece of heartache and being rebirthed to find something/one less insensitive.

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dreaming
luminous visions
of grey paisley patterns
spiral into bleak red
protruding
into an animated heartache
i shatter the illusion by
pouring
gold sunshine into my solar plexus
it dissipates into an image of me
hanging
from a blue satin ribbon
stapled on a water lily cloud
slipping
i feel the wicked wind lash my soul
then whipped by the violent aura
i vaporise into crisp petals
reaching
the ground i'm folded to dust
and reborn a
smellless sunflower
opening

© 2011 solitare



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love the imagry and word play... great write

Posted 6 Years Ago


flippin' eck this is great, shame folk on here aren't very good at coming forward with comments unless you kiss a*s on hundreds of their poems, well i for one am a fan and i salute you : )

Posted 6 Years Ago



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Added on May 17, 2011
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Tags: dream, heartache

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solitare
solitare

Perth, Australia



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