Seed

Seed

A Poem by spence
"

Are we reaping what we sow?

"

Bad seeds
Clump together like weeds
Build armies of defiance
To disguise their lack of self-reliance

 

Good seeds
Drift on by
Floating high in natures eye
No slaves they make in subjugation
Their aim is life's perpetuation

© 2010 spence


Author's Note

spence
Just a rhyming thought- poetry's not really my strong point!

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This really does describe nature and how plants grow like a army. I adore the metaphors you have used it really does suit the poem. I love flowers and the title being only seed really suits the poem too. This poem gives me imagery of gardening and planting seeds. It's like you have watched them grow overnight spending every second of your time watching them. Amazing write

Posted 13 Years Ago



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spence
spence

Grimsby, United Kingdom



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Just returning to WritersCafe after a couple of years in the wilderness of life. I'm a 40 year old (until December 2013, at least) father of two, former youth and community worker, sometime socio-pol.. more..

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