Purple Juice

At the request of Kiri Nells i wrote this about grape juice. I was bored anyway...

Dark and cool,
ran all the way down
the parched rough throat.
With this I will not frown.
Now i must make a note,
that the best liquid
would have to be,
and I know you will agree
It is grape juice!

Author's Note

This was just for fun, someone said to write about grape juice and i wanted to see if i could... I know it sucks but go easy on it please.

Reviews

[Ciara]

haha good one

[light and ashes]

Lol I do love grape juice but I am not sure its my favoirte. This is a suprisingly great poem written about grape juice!

[Yina]

Lol I love this!!! Go grape juice!!:) lol. Grape juice will forever remind me of my baseball coach. He loves Welch's grape juice. Oh an you're probably picturing an older guy when I say coach but he's actually only 19-20;):) Lol

[Wolfwind Words]

You have succeeded in your poetic task for sure! For one who dislikes grape juice, I found that I had to see it in a brighter light after reading this piece.

Great Ink!
Wolfie

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

I love the simplicity of the wording and the extreme knoweldge of feeling and emotion, well done, great read.

[Star Wolf]

I love this, its great. I do love grape juice so I have to agree with this. Clever and awesome!

[Just Me]

Wow..... I cant describe it. Very random. I liked it!