mediocre brunches with Insanity Montana

"i'm up to $40 or $60 a day.."

is the bell that rings loud

through her mountains of speech

it ghosts her on the sidewalk,

screams above the referee,

taps her on the shoulder

after 9pm

on city streets,

paints her bruised in window panes

above the chaste melee

..and it may be..

just another middle finger in the surf

of an ocean full of "f**k you"s,

but that's her bird,

and there's her,

flipping it.

Reviews

[Wildest Dreams]

If I had a dime for every time, good or bad birdy thoughts included i'd be raking it in :) Love this write.

[Kim]

Fantastic poem - I love your style and how vividly you create the scene with the least amount of words. I adore the minimalism and I like that you keep a flowing rhythm in your work even though the lines are short. Nice work. :)

[DrD]

We share the idea, Stimey, that as much should be said with as few words possible. I like your super dramatic endings and soft, easy buildups that are almost like foreplay. Excellent job. I liked this very much.