Your Loving Wings

Take me under your wings

Your broad masculine wings

Have your way with me

Like no other could do

Set this spirit free,

I want to feel your warmth

Your masculine embrace

To feel those feathers

With such grace,

You tickle my fancy

And aroused I feel

It's a dream

A dream come true

That I'm proud to be a part of

Because you fly me through beautiful hues.

Reviews

[Al R. Arce]

Nice piece! Simple, yet you make your thought clear. Just one constructive comment. I your piece you refer to your lover in second person, "you", yet on your last verse you switch to third person, "he". Shouldn't it be "Because you fly me through beautiful hues."?

[Tarry Franck]

Yes it should - thanks for catching that for me.

[Coyote Poetry]

Beautiful and sweet words. The poem was gentle and kind. Love poetry should be. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you so much Coyote

[Eddie Phillips]

Yet another sweet and sweeping poem.

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you Eddie

[TPK Stories]

Beautiful and so full of passion ... good work Tarry! :-)

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you Starrleena.

[Lover Of Words]

Love is simply beautiful and you make it sound like heaven within your heart of words... Simply heartfelt and i know these real feelings cause i see them in your eyes... Lovely

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you so much my dear angel

[Lover Of Words]

My pleasure always

[Jack...]

Your words are carved of beautful love my friend. May they last always.

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you so much Jack

[Lydia Shutter]

The romantic longing and desire to be close to someone is so strong in this write. A dream come true...heavy sigh! Lovely. Lydi**

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you so much Lydi**