75 Prayers

I had a dream the other night

That it was a must to

Say prayers 75 times

For the sins I have committed

And as I did I blew that many candles out

But I couldn't finish all 75 that night,

Does this mean I let God down

I hope not

I hope he understands it takes longer

Sometimes for people to finish 

Confessing their sins

After all I feel it was just a blemish,

It will fade and I will have the strength

To complete what he has set before me

And I will be able to confess these sins

And set this bondage free.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

"I hope he understands it takes longer
Sometimes for people to finish
Confessing their sins"
I believe God forgive the honest heart and mind. When we seek forgiveness and walk the good road. God will know and understand. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you Coyote

[Anand Sehgal]

To err is human. don't worry too much ! :)
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[Tarry Franck]

So true Anand - Thank you for reviewing :)

[TPK Stories]

Freedom from bondage and sin. . .a human lifelong struggle. . .well told, Tarry.

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you so much Starrleena

[Lover Of Words]

Goodness my dear you have left so much power in this poem that it leaves a mark in everyones eyes this is very moving very inspirational

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you Kelsey. That means so much to me that you see it this way.

[Lover Of Words]

Your words always inspire my dear

[Tarry Franck]

thank you sweetie

[Lover Of Words]

No need to thank me its always been that way.... You inspire my heart

[Tarry Franck]

That's so sweet Kelsey. Love you.

[Lover Of Words]

I love you too

[Leigh]

Great inspirational writing, please do more, I am imagining the subject either in a church or blowing out candles on a birthday cake, either way it is moving

[Tarry Franck]

It was a dream I had and just woke and the words just flowed. I had an amazing experience in church that night and this was a sign for me I believe. Thank you for reviewing.

[Leigh]

What does 75 represent?

[Tarry Franck]

The prayers and candles

[Leigh]

Of course, that would create a lot of light and energy

[Tarry Franck]

Yes indeed Leigh

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Awesome Tarry:) God understand more than we shall ever know, As long as we confess our sins in all we do He is just enough to forgive us all:) Great poem full of mercy and wonder.

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you so much Jonathan. I knew you would understand!!! :)

[Al R. Arce]

Somehow, this has the seed of a bigger story..!

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you Gabriel

[Sky]

Brilliant poem..Is this a confession of an old man?Anyways..The way he accepts his sins.His doubt.Beautifully portrayed dear. :-)

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you very much Sky. This was from a dream I had.

[Cryingkate]

It pains me to see someone go thru this emotional torture

[Tarry Franck]

I know but I will pull through by the grace of God. Thanks for reviewing.

[Cryingkate]

I know you'll make it thru. Your a fighter and just too nice :-)

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you Cryingkate

[Hope]

A brilliant work ! Good job..Keep writing :)

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you very much Hope!

[Hope]

You are most welcome ! :)